Friday, September 5, 2008

Draft Press Release 1 : Announcement

FOR IMMIDIATE RELEASE
September 5, 2008
Preston Parker,
President
ABC Real Estate LLC
123 Creative Way
Logan, Ut 84321
(801)-555-4567

BILL GATTEN’S REAL ESTATE SYTSEM DESIGNED TO HELP PEOPLE SAVE MONEY IS USED AT ABC REAL ESTATE LLC IN LOGAN, UT.
ABC Real Estate LLC was formed on January 1, 2008. Preston Parker the president of the new LLC uses a real estate system that has been simplified by Bill Gatten. Gatten uses benificiary-directed equity-holding land trust (BHED land trust) in a simplified version that is designed to help people own homes. The system helps those who don’t have money for a down payment as well as those who don’t have a good credit score above 680. Parker said, “We want people to own homes, we want people to have an ownership mentality.”
Parkers main goal for his LLC in its starting stages is to find investors who have credit scores above 680, as well as looking for investors with money. Parker believes people will invest in the company to help people stay in homes, and the investors will also be making passive income.
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3 comments:

Lacy Ann :) said...

Nice job. Your press release is really organized and makes sense especially with the time we had to do it :)

mckell said...

I liked your quote! It worked with your story really well.

Jo Olsen said...

I think you did a really good job of explaining the system in simple terms. nice work.